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I pressed my first finger to his skin...
it traveled up...
sliding across his bare chest...
coming to it's destination...
directly above his lambaste heart.

"Pound," it said.
a second finger met the point...

"Pound," it said.
a third...

"Pound," it said.
a fourth finger...

"Hush," it said.
no more fingers...

"How does it feel?" i persisted.

"I don't understand," he returned.

"Doesn't it bother you? That noise"

He half heartedly glared at my optimistic stare.

"You should know," he murmured.

"But I don't so tell me. How does it feel?"

I was eager now. Excited to know.

His chested rose and fell abruptly.

My insides tousled at the sudden motion,
but ignored his agitation and continued my childish stare.

"How come you don't know yourself?" he budged. Irate obviously.

"You don't remember? I gave you mine."
My fingers pressed done on the gently pulsing spot, trying to stop its continuous rising.
"I've forgotten. Will you remind me?" I pleaded.

After a moment his glare softened.
"Yes," still annoyed.
He pried my fingers away from the pulse, but placed my palm back to the skin.
"Listen."
He whispered the command.
"Don't speak.  Don't think."
©2008-2009 ~Girl-In-A-FishBowl
:icongirl-in-a-fishbowl:

Author's Comments

About A Girl Who Wants To Know What It Feels Like To Have A Heart--Now That She's Given Hers Away To Him--Simply Because She Cannot Remember.

I Felt That I Needed To Write Something.
This Bit Doesn't Seem As Confusing As Some Of The Others.
That's Quite An Accomplishment If You Ask Me.

I Think I'm Getting Better With Each Try.
I Hope My Instincts Are Write.

Enjoy!

~Kris

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:iconpunkstarrchik:
i love it!!! you've inspired a drawing!!! you're my new muse!!!!

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*gasp*! Yeah!!!!:glomp: :dance:
I Don't Even Remember What That One Was About.
Have You Read The Other Ones? :work:
I Wrote Some Early This Month...

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:la:
:icongirl-in-a-fishbowl:
Oh! And I Can't Wait To See The Drawing!!!
So Excited!!! :boogie:

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:la:
:iconpunkstarrchik:
merry christmas! :new:i got a bamboo tablet!!!!!!!:headbang:

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Merry Christmas!!! :ohnoes:My Gifts Haven't Come In Yet...:shakefist:

YEAH!!! TABLET!!!:wow:
Why Is It Bamboo???:evileye:

:santa:
:rudolph:

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:la:
:iconpunkstarrchik:
its not made of bamboo! its just from the wacom line of tablets! its thin and sleek and SEXY!!!!:b0x0rz:

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OHHHHH...Of Course o.o
Well, Is It Easy To Use?

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:iconpunkstarrchik:
YUP!!!!!

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That's Good.
Did You Get Anything Else.

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